Dear parents and teachers, Thank you for coming here today to our 6th grade graduation. Before I talk about how awesome this year has been, all of us here would like to thank the parents and the teachers for helping us make this year so memorable. The motivation of our teachers and parents has kept us all going and has made this year a successful one. In words it would be hard to show our appreciation towards you guys so the least we can do is give you a round of applause (applause).
Thank you parents. So back to my speech. This last week has been lots of fun. I wish every year the graduation was like this. Leaving Serrano, I feel sad because I have been at this school since kindergarten and when I look back I am leaving a place from where I learned so much. Sure I got bored a lot during math along with another 90 students but now after 7 years, I have grown attached to Serrano and it’s almost like my second home. Almost. We leave this school with many memories and for some of us many missing homework assignments. Something that I learned this year is that there is always a good side to a problem and I know that next year we will all be going to C.V. and that’s also a good school.
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May 20th, 2009 at 8:26 pm
Heheh… it’s cute, I like it. =)
May 23rd, 2009 at 6:14 am
I think it sounds fine, but you sohuld take out the “so back to my speech” part after ‘thank you parents”.
May 23rd, 2009 at 7:23 am
sounds good to me
May 25th, 2009 at 11:08 pm
The second paragraph is funnier than the first. =D The last sentence with C.V. kinda makes me confused, though…Don’t you think there should be a better ending? I think it’s a run on too but what do people care about run ons if your speaking…? You might wanna change it if your teacher is grading it though…>.< Hope I helped!
May 26th, 2009 at 11:50 am
when giving a speech, you are speaking for the rest of your grade as well. Try to use “we” and “us” and other words like that to make the other students feel like you’re speaking on behalf of everyone. not just yourself.
also, people know you’re making a speech so avoid using “before i talk about how…” and “so back to my speech”
Say, “these past few years have been awesome” and “anyway” or “back to business” or something to that effect.
changing that may help improve your speech. good luck!